Measurement Of Success, A Poem For Your Comment?

Another free form oldie – happy to receive your corrections
Measurement of success
Go on
have a guess
How many feet
crossed that line
trod this passage
stood on this patch
felt the nakedness of carpet
been de-liberated
then quickly imprisoned
felt the shame of publicity
and the glamour of newness
been squeezed and tortured
given room they don’t need
looked at themselves in fancy dress
with a critical eye
been pampered and lied to
been convinced and satisfied
tried and failed and tried
and failed
Guess
how many feet
between
profit and success
fit and failure
choice and reward
bargain and decision
how many halves
compared to wholes
how many fractions
to the right number
how many eyes
have stared
lifeless
how many tongues
have remained silent
how many rejections
how much disinterest
how much impulse
how many feet
between a sale and a loss
How many soles have you sold today?

Bathstore – Are Their Sales Genuine, Are They Almost All Year Round Like Dfs And Allied Carpets?

well isnt allied carpets ssupposed to be shutting down you know cos of the credit crunch! So you might be able to catch a bargain
DONT TAKE MY WORD FOR IT THOUGH!